I am with her
as if
with no one else
(because I know of no one else)
I am with her
as if
I have nothing to do
(because I don’t have anything to do)
I am with her
as if
I enjoy all the action
(because I’m a man, and I do enjoy action)
I am with her
as if
I am in love with her
(because, indeed, I am in love with her)
as if
with no one else
(because I know of no one else)
I am with her
as if
I have nothing to do
(because I don’t have anything to do)
I am with her
as if
I enjoy all the action
(because I’m a man, and I do enjoy action)
I am with her
as if
I am in love with her
(because, indeed, I am in love with her)
2 comments:
Erik-very cool poem. Certainly a la cummings. I like the parenthetical admissions. Slightly risque (probably your best line)-much like cummings's poetry. Well done!
hmm. your poem definately is like e.e cummings poems. It was very creative. Nice and simple. Good Picture!
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